Year 4/5/6
Below are some snippets of writing by 4/5/6. As you can see their writing is becoming more engaging and expressive. Please note the variety of genres here.
The House ~ By Max
The huge blood-curdling tiger was guarding the haunted house near the tree. I saw someone through the window of the creepy shack. He looked straight at me, then all the creepy human skulls looked straight at me, the tiger got up. It was double the size of a normal tiger and it was white.
The Mean Little Birds ~ By Tallarah and Leonie
Twenty little birds were sitting on a power line chatting. When a bigger bird wanted to sit with them, but they did not like him, because he was different and bigger than the little birds. They made fun of him because he was taller. He went to sit with them, to make friends, do you know what happened then…..The Giraffe at my Door ~ by Belle
You wouldn't believe the look on my face when I open my front door to see…. A tall Giraffe staring at me. The giraffe was looking at me with a bag of carrots, sad eyes, and….
Reach for the Stars ~ by Jayde
I feel like the artist has created an illusion for some, because there can be other hidden things you can’t see at first sight, but once you can see them it’s like they’re beaming so much that you can’t unsee them.